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05/31/12
You have done a nice job of suggesting just what Pilate might have been going through at this crucial moment in history. It is interesting to me to stop and consider such individual thoughts and feelings. Thanks for reminding me with this article. I really liked it.
05/31/12
Such a great story to read. The best creative fiction is that which, when taken from a biblical account, you can see it being plausible. This does that very well. It flowed well from the beginning and you can feel the somber resignation in Pilate at the end. You painted this one very well!
05/31/12
Well written piece. You managed to bring it to life with what Pilate was thinking and internalizing. I love Biblical stories, this one included. Good job.

God bless~
05/31/12
I love when Bible stories are brought to life. This is very well written, you did a great job. God bless!
This was masterful. The POV you chose was great and your way with words makes the story spark. Great, great entry.
You did a great job of bringing this familiar story to life. Even though I know it well, I felt like I was hearing it in a new way
Congratulations for ranking 12th in level 3!