The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/12
I love this. And yes, that is the main tool of cults, for sure... Make sure they don't ask too many questions, and make sure they are afraid to ask the really hard questions. I'm glad your MC found a way out.
06/02/12
Powerful and penetrating entry. I was thrilled with the ending. Thank goodness she got out. Great job.

God Bless~
06/04/12
So sad how people attempt to manipulate others. You portrayed it well.
06/07/12
Congratulations on fourth place for this beautifully written poem. You captured the hopelessness of the MC very well.
06/07/12
Congrats! God Bless~
06/07/12
Congrats on being 4th! God Bless~