The Official Writing Challenge
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11/02/05
I love the prose poem near the end that begins "Blow, wind..." Just gorgeous.

In par. 5, you use "malevolence" as a noun. Maybe replace it with "...malevolent odors..."?

Otherwise, an absolutely splendid piece.
11/02/05
A beautiful and passionate prayer filled with His fragrance.
11/04/05
Oh yes, Praising the Lord with you in prayer. How beautiful.
God bless you, littlelight