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This is a great take on the topic. I enjoyed it and was pulled in right away. I liked how the friend witnessed without becoming sanctimonious. Nice job.
05/26/12
Great job with this entire piece. The friend managed to bring forth her point without pontificating. Perfect blend of sincerity and meaning. Nicely done.

God Bless~
Hi -

Very good job of weaving this piece into a satisfying conclusion. Pondering - food for thought - realization -- yes, very good job.

Please note:

Typically, 9/11 is not spelled out Nine Eleven.

Heaven and hell aren't typically capitalized unless they begin a sentence. In the Holy Bible - KJV, those words aren't capitalized unless at the start of sentences.
05/29/12
Nice take on the topic showing the risk the yet unsaved is taking in not receiving Christ. Well done.