The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved it! Goosebumps and all!
05/25/12
This was fabulous. As I've said on the previous entry, I simply adore Biblical stories. I loved the entire piece. Thank you.

God bless~
05/31/12
I like the way your story put me in the character's seat feeling the emotions and thinking the thoughts of the MC. It brought home how amazing the story of Lazarus really is and how it connects to our lives today. Well-done.
Congratulations for ranking 24 overall!