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Great job of letting us feel your MC's struggle. A sad story, indeed, and one repeated all-too-often inside the doors of the church. We should be helping, not turning away. Your MC was a real trooper!
Wow! What a riveting piece. You did such a great job of bringing the MC to life. I was so caught up in the story I found myself holding my breath. I hope this story will help others to find the courage they need to leave behind an abusive past.
Thank you for this deeply profound story that touched my heart. I have seen this more often than not, and have heard "their stories" each one similar to this MC.

You've outlined the MC's internal conflicts and emotional upheaval so well.
Great job with this poignant piece that did have a "happy ending." Beautifully written and told.

God bless you~
Beautifully written! I like the plot. A very interesting read.
Congratulations for placing 8th in level three!