The Official Writing Challenge
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This is really lovely. I felt like Jesus was speaking directly to me.

I noticed a couple of typos in the 3 stanza and 3 line you had your instead of you're and later you had Hear instead of Here.

This is a well-written piece that just flows off the screen. You did leave me with a beautiful sense of hope.
05/26/12
I loved this sweet read, it touched my heart...Thank you.

God bless~
Hi -

This is exceptional in heart stirring content. I love the title, too.

Please note:

The last stanza - the word you should be your.
05/28/12
An encouraging poem of assurance that lets us know whatever risks we may have to take to follow Christ, they are all worthwhile. Good job on a well written piece.
05/29/12
Maybe I'm not so strong on poetry, but apart from the typos and some rhythm changes, I sese God's strength and comfort coming through.