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This is a brilliant POV. I so enjoyed the journey into Mary's thoughts and dreams. I know the devil has put some twisted things in my head before so I'm sure he went after Mary as well.

The only thing I struggled with is the lottery line. I think of a lottery as a good prize but it felt like Nazareth was not the pride of the people. I guess you were being sarcastic but it made me stop and try to figure it all out.

You covered the topic in such a fresh and different way. I've heard the story of Mary countless times but never quite like this. You did an outstanding, well-written job on this piece. Loved it.
Fabulous job of recreating what may have been in Mary's mind during this time of her life. Descriptive and powerful. Thank you.

God bless~
Nicely written enactment of the story of old. Well done!
Excellent representation of "what might have been." How blessed she was to be the mother of the Messiah.