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This is a brilliant POV. I so enjoyed the journey into Mary's thoughts and dreams. I know the devil has put some twisted things in my head before so I'm sure he went after Mary as well.

The only thing I struggled with is the lottery line. I think of a lottery as a good prize but it felt like Nazareth was not the pride of the people. I guess you were being sarcastic but it made me stop and try to figure it all out.

You covered the topic in such a fresh and different way. I've heard the story of Mary countless times but never quite like this. You did an outstanding, well-written job on this piece. Loved it.
05/26/12
Fabulous job of recreating what may have been in Mary's mind during this time of her life. Descriptive and powerful. Thank you.

God bless~
05/28/12
Nicely written enactment of the story of old. Well done!
Excellent representation of "what might have been." How blessed she was to be the mother of the Messiah.