The Official Writing Challenge
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Your entry was effortless to read, taking this reader to a different time and place. A time of pounding heart and the books' escape. Good picture of the weeks topic.
05/25/12
Great job! This could be an entire children's book. I loved the flow and the emotions in this piece.

Nicely done. Thank you.

God bless~
This wonderful story takes th reader along on a painful journey. It rings of truth, making me thankful for the possibly happy ending.
05/25/12
The pain of being different comes through and strums the heartstrings of all those who can identify with this MC. Thanks for ending this entry on a happy and hope-filled note. Great writing throughout this worthy read.
05/29/12
Very evocative and nostalgic touch here, and I love the gently warm prod towards hope that closes it off. Great stuff.
Congratulations for placing 12th in level four and 18 overall!!