The Official Writing Challenge
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Your entry was effortless to read, taking this reader to a different time and place. A time of pounding heart and the books' escape. Good picture of the weeks topic.
Great job! This could be an entire children's book. I loved the flow and the emotions in this piece.

Nicely done. Thank you.

God bless~
This wonderful story takes th reader along on a painful journey. It rings of truth, making me thankful for the possibly happy ending.
The pain of being different comes through and strums the heartstrings of all those who can identify with this MC. Thanks for ending this entry on a happy and hope-filled note. Great writing throughout this worthy read.
Very evocative and nostalgic touch here, and I love the gently warm prod towards hope that closes it off. Great stuff.
Congratulations for placing 12th in level four and 18 overall!!