The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/12
Fantastic job with the retelling of the familiar Bible story. The graphic and at times, poetic descriptions of what was happening was brilliant.

Excellent piece. Thank you.

God bless~
05/25/12
Your retelling of this event was gripping and held my interest from start to finish. You truly brought this story to life for your readers and reinforced the message of God's goodness.
05/31/12
You truly brought this Bible story to life for me! Well done indeed!