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10/31/05
Lovely, evokative. The first part elicited nostagic memories for me.
The two personal stories you share are beautifully and tenderly written.
11/02/05
Very descriptive. Should possibly be two separate stories, though. You love all of the same smells as I do.
I agree, the last two are the most moving parts of this article. I liked it when you changed from the 'you' to 'I' perspective. That gave added impact to your last section.
11/03/05
Fragrances emit many memories in me as well. Your story was very touching. I relate well to that "baby" scent. I surely miss it.
11/04/05
I can almost smell all the fragrences you descrbed in reading your story. Very scentimental, and touching memories. God bless you, littlelight