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Lovely, evokative. The first part elicited nostagic memories for me.
The two personal stories you share are beautifully and tenderly written.
Very descriptive. Should possibly be two separate stories, though. You love all of the same smells as I do.
I agree, the last two are the most moving parts of this article. I liked it when you changed from the 'you' to 'I' perspective. That gave added impact to your last section.
Fragrances emit many memories in me as well. Your story was very touching. I relate well to that "baby" scent. I surely miss it.
I can almost smell all the fragrences you descrbed in reading your story. Very scentimental, and touching memories. God bless you, littlelight