The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/12
This story had me nervous from beginning to end. Great job with dialogue and showing what they were going through! Loved the ending..Nicely done.

God Bless~
05/26/12
I so wanted to know the rest of this story. Nicely done.
06/02/12
I could actually feel the tension in my back. Good job!