The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh I love this! What a delightful story. I could feel the adrenaline surging off the page. I think the ending is perfect.
05/26/12
This was an interesting read, I couldn't figure it out at first. Then with the curlers and panty hose, I kind of caught on...nicely done. I enjoyed this.

God Bless~
Hi -

Thank you for this lively adventure!

Delightful!
05/26/12
I'm not sure how appropriate it is for a male to comment in any sympathetic tones, but my testosteron-imy is simply to say that I enjoyed the twist at the end.
05/27/12
A catchy and creative poem with mild humor! Well done on a nicely written piece and an enjoyable read.
05/29/12
Ha! I was caught off guard by the ending. Having raised four daughters, I found it a delightful read. Great writing. God bless!