The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/12
Awwwww. I LOVED THIS! It was sweet, touching and held such a significant and prolific meaning.

Her job was "important" to her lovely "gray haired" ladies. They loved her, and she was all they needed and more.

I remember how the ladies in my nursing home used to look forward to "their beauty parlor" day! It meant so much to each of them.

It made me smile and cry at once. Excellent job with this. Thank you.

God Bless~
Great contrast here of the famous and not-so-famous. I loved the mc's heart.
Ha...when I first read the description "pretty and perky" I was ho hum ... but as you wove that into the story it was perfect. This story moves along at a good pace to keep the reader's interest; enough so we would like to hear more about these two characters.
05/24/12
Simply beautiful. I like the way your MC chooses simple friendship over fame. Congratulations!
05/24/12
We never see ourselves as others see us, do we? Things that seem so little to us can be so meaningful to others. Reasons to bloom where we are planted...that is why God made us all different.