The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/12
Oh I loved this so much! Such an important message to all of us. How heaven rejoices for those who are obedient and faithful to the Lord.

Excellent imagery, and such a well written moving piece.
Thank you.

God bless~
I have tears in my eyes over this. You did a fantastic job drawing me in. When my mom died people waited in line for over two hours to pay their respects. I feel like her arrival in heaven might have been quite like Mary's. Lovely writing.
05/19/12
Right! You've captured my mind and heart with your illustration of the only fame that really counts. I loved this.
05/19/12
This was a real "rolling out the red carpet" kind of fame for someone who had become first in the heavenly realm!

Hallelujah! What a rejoicing!

Wonderfully cute piece.
Hi -

Yes indeed - this is an adorable read. Delightful.

It made me long to be in heaven.

And I loved how you weaved this story. Yes, indeed, delightful
read.

Thank you!
I pray that everyone's Homecoming will be like this. What a beautiful story!
05/22/12
What a wonderful story! It brings joy to the reader's heart. I loved this. Well done. God bless!
05/24/12
Congratulations! Nicely done. God Bless~