The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/12
Excellent job. I loved this! Short, thought extremely powerful...and the ending was gripping!

Thanks. God Bless~
05/20/12
What a great modern day fable. This could have been straight from the "Brothers Grimm". :)

It is also well written, with your turns of phrase perfectly timed and alway right on point. Great job!
This is such a clever take on the topic. I really enjoyed it and you left me with a sense of hope which is the best thing of all.
Congratulations for placing 19th overall!
05/26/12
Cheryl, I'm going to feature this lovely allegory on the Front Page showcase for the week of June 11. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!
Wonderfully written. An encouragement to those faithfully toiling on...
06/14/12
So creative!!!! Loved it!