The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent job. I loved this! Short, thought extremely powerful...and the ending was gripping!

Thanks. God Bless~
What a great modern day fable. This could have been straight from the "Brothers Grimm". :)

It is also well written, with your turns of phrase perfectly timed and alway right on point. Great job!
This is such a clever take on the topic. I really enjoyed it and you left me with a sense of hope which is the best thing of all.
Congratulations for placing 19th overall!
Cheryl, I'm going to feature this lovely allegory on the Front Page showcase for the week of June 11. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!
Wonderfully written. An encouragement to those faithfully toiling on...
So creative!!!! Loved it!