The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/12
The words and metaphors within this entry moved me so much. It was hauntingly beautiful. The entire piece, the descriptive verses, the anguish of the MC...the MC's internal conflicts. All of this and more... engaging this reader and pulling me in entirely.

The ending was powerful and exploded into a memorable and brilliant story.

Thank you so much.

God Bless~
05/20/12
Awesome, awesome job. The scenes you show me with your words are vivid and compelling. Your metaphor of fame as a person (or pet - I wasn't sure which) had me for at least the first few paragraphs. Great job. I really love this piece.
Congratulations for placing 12th overall!