The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful progression! I didn't see where you were going, and then *punch* - there HE was! The title is perfect. Beautifully orchestrated, with an intense message. THANK YOU for this!
05/18/12
Beautiful job with this meaningful and touching poem. I loved the way it was categorically building up to the magnificence of God. I loved it. Thank you so much.

God Bless~
Your examples of fame were excellently drawn, as was the description of the One who lived in obscurity. And I really like your last verse.
WOOOOHOOOOOO! Congratulations, Margaret!
05/24/12
Congratulations! Nicely done. God Bless~
05/24/12
I love the amazing contrasts in this wonderful poem, especially that part about "swallowing the ground with cheetah speed." Amazing work. Congratulations!
05/25/12
Inspired! A wonderful poem. Congratulations!
05/27/12
A beautiful poem. I really enjoyed it. And congratulations on 5th place.
05/29/12
So beautifully written and deserving of accolades. Loved the format used.