The Official Writing Challenge
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I often don't always "get' poems but this one just grabbed me. I'm so tired from feeling sick all of the time and often wonder if I'll be able to stand one more step or one more heartbeat. You gave me hope. I'm trembling with tears as I write this.
05/11/12
Intense and powerfully executed. This was a deep and profoundly emotional poem. It made me feel the pain and anguish of the writer.

Thank you for this.

God bless~
05/18/12
Oh this is beautiful Beth - what a journey. So recognisable in its deep essence. Thankyou for this. Congratulations on your placing.