The Official Writing Challenge
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This is beautiful and brought tears to my eyes.
05/11/12
Oh my goodness, so touching. My heart broke reading this. Yet, the ending brings us to have hope...faith, hope & God go hand-in-hand.

Thank you for this.

God bless you~
05/12/12
Very touching poem. I wondered if this was a personal experience. If so I do hope the outcome is for the best.
05/24/12
Have just read this Vince (a little late I realise!) and it is so beautiful and so real. I could almost imagine I was there in your first verse. Thank you for portraying such agonies of heart and hopeful longings in such a tender, wonderful way.