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05/12/12
A well written entry that was on topic. Biblical references are always appreciated by this writer.

Good job. God Bless~
05/12/12
Well written. Hagar and Ishmael are a story deserving of the telling. One feels for them. And you've brought that sympathy into your moving story.
05/15/12
This is a beautiful and careful retelling of such an important biblical story. I really enjoyed it.
05/15/12
Very good story-telling. Great descriptions.
Wow, you really did a fine job bringing this to life. I could feel the despair. You covered the topic in a perfect way, showing the reader what weariness is.
05/17/12
Well written; but the story doesn't end there and it deserved more of your talent.

This proves you deserve to be in the master's category. Thank you.