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This well captures the ebb and flow of a typical family day
05/11/12
Great job of realistically portraying a typical family rummaging through life.

I enjoyed this. Thank you.

God Bless~
05/12/12
I enjoyed your story. It rang true expresses well what many of us have felt at times.Well done.
Oh what a delightful story that I could so easily relate to. The ending was perfect. I could hear the ducks quacking.
Congratulations for ranking 24 overall!