The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/12
This could be in a book! Brilliant entry. Astounding and powerful message.

great job...thank you.

God bless~
05/14/12
Your style is very unique. I enjoyed reading this piece and you kept me interested trying to figure out where you were going with this story.
~Cathy~
I love the way you wrote this. I was in an auto accident 3 yrs ago and am disabled because of it. I could relate to your article so much that it was as if you knew me and actually wrote about me. Amazingly done!
05/15/12
Beautiful descriptions and imagery. I admit to having a hard time following what was going on but I think I haven't had my coffee yet this morning :) A great piece...thanks for sharing!
05/15/12
Beautiful and excellent. You have a gift. God Bless
05/15/12
Wow! What imagery - almost an allegory. I liked all the symbolism. I wanted to go back to the beginning and read it again - now that I see the whole picture.
05/16/12
I had to stop a few times and just ponder; not in a negative way but just enjoying the images.

Thank you.
05/16/12
Your words are powerful! My reaction was wow! You have it all... the message, the emotion, and the story that dramatizes explains the reality for those with chronic pain and/or fatigue. Great work!!!
This is a powerful story. I so enjoyed your illustrations and thought you did the topic justice.
05/17/12
Agreeing with the other comments, Laury. You invited us into your world with your descriptions. Praying for an answer for this painful disorder. God Bless.
Congratulations for placing 11th in level 4 and 15 overall!
05/18/12
Beautifully crafted and presented. Love the images my mind chased with each word you pieced together.

Awesome job.