The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/12
I always enjoy Biblical stories. This story was well written, and served to remind the reader of many important issues, in the Bible and for our current lives. Thank you.

God bless~
05/13/12
This is well written, a great re-tell of this time in David's life.

I didn't make the connection with the challenge word 'Weary'? I would love to understand the connection, to see the story in the light it was intended.

But I really enjoyed it, this story was a very good read.
05/13/12
Kathy, Thank you so much for the explanation of the connection for 'Weary'...it makes it so much richer now!

I had thought maybe King David was celebrating after being weary, but wow! Paralleling Michal to those of us who get grouchy at others during worship....yum...that's outstanding!

Oh you did such a nice job of bringing this to life. I could picture it all in my mind.
05/16/12
A nice recount of the biblical story from a different POV.
05/16/12
I enjoyed your re-telling of this time honored story very much. I too got thrown for a moment connecting this story to the challenge topic but, as was mentioned, i can see the weariness in the Queen's various issues with David. Nicely done!