The Official Writing Challenge
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10/31/05
I loved it!
A gripping and evocative story. Beautifully told.
10/31/05
Well done. If only we could all see into the spirit realm like this.
11/01/05
Wonderful! Can be summed up in the beautiful line "Of course I want her. She is my child." So touching.
11/01/05
It kept my interest...nice writing!
11/01/05
Bravo.. A well put scene of what we never see of ones tranforming in salvation.. Very well done.
11/01/05
Excellent! Reminds me of the type of 'songs' Carman has done. Absolutely wonderful.
It took me a while to figure out what was going on and who was who, but once I did--wow! Wonderful story!
11/02/05
Very, very good! Loved it!
Lots of truth packaged in an intriguing story. Well done.
11/02/05
This is my favorite story so far (well exceptions) but I really loved it--so intense and held my attention waiting to hear the next endearing word of the Father. God bless ya, littlelight
11/04/05
A wonderful story presented here, in bad need of an edit to clean up the antecedant and grammar issues. With a little work this moves to the winner's circle in my estimation.
11/05/05
Well done :)