The Official Writing Challenge
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05/12/12
My goodness...was this a true story? With all of the news coverage on earthquakes and tornadoes, I was so releived that neither MC was hurt.

This was a well written, and riveting entry. I was so tense when the MC was describing the destruction!

Excellent job of bringing the reader into the "forum" of events unfolding.

Thank you. God BLess~
05/17/12
This is a different piece for sure. I usually don't grin during disaster stories but from Horrible Horrie to getting the blame my lips were turned up and an occasional snicker would sneak out.