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05/05/12
What a beautiful and touching story. It was so realistic as if it was happening before my very eyes. I loved the ending and how the little girl finally gave back what was not hers to keep. It took a lot for her to give up something "so valuable and beautiful" but she was rewarded with something so much richer. loved this!

Thanks. God bless~
05/05/12
This story was so touching, I loved it. What a beautiful example of trading earthly treasure for Heavenly treasure…a clear conscience and a needed friendship so much more valuable. Great job!
"and felt like I ruined the scenery"...great line!

This was a beautiful story. I have a section of town with houses the size of mansions and often daydream of living there someday. If not there, then I daydream of the mansion in Heaven.