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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Rich (04/26/12)

TITLE: Two Friends
By Margaret Kearley
05/03/12


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Two Friends
(Luke 12:13-21. Luke 19:1-10)

On one mellow autumn evening,
Under a golden eastern sky,
Two friends sat in contemplation,
Talking of the days gone by.

Childhood days, and reminiscence
Springtime zest and youthful green,
Teenage dreams and aspirations,
Wealth and riches, then unseen.

Passing years of springs and summers
Autumns, winters, heat and cold,
Successful bounty in abundance
Had come to these two friends of old.

Tanned and bronzed by outdoor living,
Toiling, tilling, fertile soil,
One recalled with pride his harvest
Overflowing from his toil.

Ď My meagre sheds are insufficient,
Let me tell you what Iíll do,
Iíll substitute with bigger, larger
Stores and barns to see me through.í

ĎAnd then Iíll rest in my retirement,
Eat and drink, do as I please,
Take life easy, I deserve it,
Put my feet up, be at ease.í

A cloud of troubled contemplation
Lined his friendís deep furrowed brow:
ĎI used to echo just your thinking
But now Iíve changed, Iíll tell you how:í

ĎIíve met a man, His name is Jesus,
Heís changed my life, Heís saved my soul,
Heís blessed me with His full Salvation,
Forgiven my sin and made me whole.í

ĎI was a thief, I gained my riches
From a life of wrongful gain,
But now I know Godís full forgiveness
And truly, Iíve been born again.í

Zaccheus watched the upright figure
Of his friend who walked away,
Unprepared to even listen
To the words he had to say.

On one autumn sunny morning,
Under an eastern sky, azure.
One man sat in contemplation,
Weeping for a friend no more.


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Beth Muehlhausen05/04/12
The two "contemplate" and "remember" - which invites me, on some level, to do the same... Your idea is creative - to picture the rich man and Zaccheus as old friends, talking things over. I like it. Nice take on the topic. :-)
CD Swanson 05/05/12
This was so clever! Simply ingengious. I loved this poem and the meaning behind the words. Thanks.
God Bless~
Beth LaBuff 05/10/12
Margaret, I so enjoyed reading this familiar story written in your creative verse. What a powerful ending! Great work!
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 05/14/12
Congratulations for ranking 10th in level four and 11th overall!