The Official Writing Challenge
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05/04/12
This is very rich - rich and beautiful. I love this story and it has a ring of truth about it. Praise God for His 'Miss Rose's'. I love some of your descriptive phrases - like 'The words hung in mid-air without finding a place to land.' and the version of the Beatitudes. Beautiful.
05/05/12
Simply beautiful and touching piece. I loved this descriptive story that touched me and brought so many images and thoughts to my mind. Lovely. Simply lovely. Thank you.

God bless~
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