The Official Writing Challenge
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This story is outstanding on so many levels. I wish I had written it.
05/05/12
What a wonderful read! The characters so rich, the man's love for his wife and acknowledgement of their rich relationship, all based on Christ's love...well, it was brilliant!

Wonderful story!
05/05/12
Awwww...this was so poignant, so pertinent to what really matters in life. I loved this entry. This was so well written and right on topic.

The ending was powerful...Thank you.

GOD bless~
05/10/12
Congratulations! This wonderful, sweet story deserved to win. I loved your characters and the perfect ending.
I like it!
Your article deserves first place.

05/10/12
Congratulations! Well done!
05/10/12
This is so sweet! It made me laugh that he said the lemon bars wouldn't make themselves. HeHe!

This tugged at my heart and made me long to be a woman more like the selfless, compassionate Louisa.

Congratulations on your big win!

"A man's greatest treasure is his wife-- she is a gift from the LORD." ~ Proverbs 18:22
05/10/12
Congratulations and God Bless~
05/10/12
This is so wonderful and I am so glad it took a well deserved first place. A most beautiful story, brilliantly told, of really laying up treasure in Heaven. Fantastic. Well done.
05/10/12
Congratulations on your very well deserved win.
05/10/12
What a beautiful story, elegantly and skillfully written. Thanks!
05/10/12
I forgot to add congrats on top honors, Jody. :)
05/10/12
What a wonderful story! I really enjoyed it and it is beautifully written.
05/11/12
Beautifully written with a profound message.
Hi -

I absolutely adore this story. My heart leaped all the way through it.

Thank you so much for this rich read!