The Official Writing Challenge
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This story is outstanding on so many levels. I wish I had written it.
What a wonderful read! The characters so rich, the man's love for his wife and acknowledgement of their rich relationship, all based on Christ's love...well, it was brilliant!

Wonderful story!
Awwww...this was so poignant, so pertinent to what really matters in life. I loved this entry. This was so well written and right on topic.

The ending was powerful...Thank you.

GOD bless~
Congratulations! This wonderful, sweet story deserved to win. I loved your characters and the perfect ending.
I like it!
Your article deserves first place.

Congratulations! Well done!
This is so sweet! It made me laugh that he said the lemon bars wouldn't make themselves. HeHe!

This tugged at my heart and made me long to be a woman more like the selfless, compassionate Louisa.

Congratulations on your big win!

"A man's greatest treasure is his wife-- she is a gift from the LORD." ~ Proverbs 18:22
Congratulations and God Bless~
This is so wonderful and I am so glad it took a well deserved first place. A most beautiful story, brilliantly told, of really laying up treasure in Heaven. Fantastic. Well done.
Congratulations on your very well deserved win.
What a beautiful story, elegantly and skillfully written. Thanks!
I forgot to add congrats on top honors, Jody. :)
What a wonderful story! I really enjoyed it and it is beautifully written.
Beautifully written with a profound message.
Hi -

I absolutely adore this story. My heart leaped all the way through it.

Thank you so much for this rich read!