The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/12
Your poem is rich with sensory images. I wanted to loose myself in your Eden world. I think favorite lines are, "I've tasted heaven's nectar in gold goblets of the sun." and "I've sensed the scents of heaven in our honeysuckle world." This is one of the most beautiful descriptions of nature, I've ever read. And of course, just the fact that this is a foretaste, blows my mind!
05/03/12
Awww... Yes! We are children of the King and have the wonders of the world (and eternity's treaures) to enjoy.
05/05/12
Simply beautiful...This poem is what "poetic" means. Lovely, simple, powerful.

Thank you. God Bless~