The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/12
Well written prose, provides a clear cut picture of the story your words are painting.

Good job.
This flows and rhymes so elegantly. You captured what is happening to many families today but still left a ray of hope.
05/04/12
"Embracing the one who gave it all." Beautiful! Thank you for this entry.

God Bless you~
05/07/12
This was ... brillant! My favorite part:

Wealth is not measured in tangible mass,
Nor by the world’s view of gain.
But in joys to share with those who care,
Are value and worth made plain.

So well written and touches the heart deeply. Awesome work here!
05/08/12
Beautiful, beautiful! God bless!
05/09/12
A nicely written poem showing the contrast between true riches and those of earthly gains. I particularly like the concluding stanza which message is so clear and well crafted. Well done on an excellent piece!