The Official Writing Challenge
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This story touched me deeply because my grandmother valued the land much like your MC. I would much rather view an open meadow, prairie, or mountain range than see another shopping mall or unnecessary sub-division scar the land.
This piece spoke volumes of the irreverent way America has misused God's land.
Loved the descriptive phrases throughout this piece which painted pictures in my mind. Great job with the topic.
What a marvelous ending to an otherwise disturbing trend in the body of your story. I wish more people of today could see the value of what once was and start to appreciate what they have. Excellent writing!
Wow - This story had me from the first word to the very last. It was such a powerful entry. I enjoyed the touched me.
Thank you.

God bless~