The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/12
Simple and yet so beautiful in its message. The last line says it all as the MC recognizes how rich he/she is.
Just So amazingly well done. Powerful words and imagery.
I love the simple metaphor and the imagery you used in this poem. Very well done!
This is a beautiful idea, beautifully written.
05/04/12
I love the simplistic message of this poem; your last line sums it all up. Great writing!
05/04/12
This is so beautiful--I absolutely loved this poem! It makes me think this is how God wants us to view the blessings He's given.
05/05/12
Poetic, rich and gripping. I absolutely adored this. Thank you so much.

God Bless~
Excellent!
Wealth in memories and wonderfully written