The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this. Reminded me of a best friend in school who fell in love with a service guy, they never lasted and she married another. She thought back so often and so unsure that she had to meet him face to face to find out if she still had feelings for him. She discovered he was nothing like that teenage girl had remembered. Now she is free and happily married.
Good writing, that's all I can say.
04/28/12
Beautiful job with this. I can truly almost see it as a "movie" on Lifetime, or Hallmark. The type of movie where the female lead looks back, and then suddenly there is the flash back. Fast foward, and it was the correct decision after all! Loved it, good job, I wanted to read more.

Well written. God Bless~
A well written story. Life is full of choices, each one leading us in a certain direction. It is so easy to look back and ask,"What if, but "what if's" don't really exist, only "here and now's." You were able to show that in the story: enjoy the blessings where you are today.