The Official Writing Challenge
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Absolutely perfect.

This poem has perfect cadence, sweet, sweet rhyme, and is just a complete joy to read.
Very cleverly written. Your word usage was absolutely engaging. Enjoyed reading every line!
This is very good. I can see this in a church bulletin.

I read this three times, so good. Excellent poem...and such a powerful message.

I loved it. God Bless~
What a wonderful poem you have written. Although it's written with a specific Scripture in mind, it easily translates to our every day lives and the fears we have to face. Such a beautiful encouragement to us all, well done.
Wonderful! Loved every single beautiful word!
The rhythm of your poem is so beautiful as are the words. You did an excellent job with this entry, keeping right on target. Fantastic writing!
Oh this is so beautiful. It not only works for the Bible story but it fits for modern day troubles as well. How blessed I am that He touched me.
Congratulations for placing 10th in Masters and 14th overall!