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04/26/12
Such a good piece of writing!

It reminded me of the ROTC at the local high school; they had a girl commander & she wasn't taking any mess from anyone!

Their rifle unit took honors in every competition and it was due to the 'girl general' LOL

Great story, great heart...!
Ah, yes. This sure does bring back memories. I was in the Color Guard and spent countless hours being yelled at by our drill sergeant while marching around. We did take 1st at Nationals. I performed with a horrible case of mono and then missed two months of school, but it felt so good to stand there and receive that first place trophy. Thanks for this well-written piece and the flood of memories.
04/28/12
Well written piece with purpose and magnitude. I'm sure it brought back a multitude of memories for many.

Nicely done. Thank you.

God Bless~
Congratulations for placing 9th in Masters and 13th overall!