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04/26/12
Such a good piece of writing!

It reminded me of the ROTC at the local high school; they had a girl commander & she wasn't taking any mess from anyone!

Their rifle unit took honors in every competition and it was due to the 'girl general' LOL

Great story, great heart...!
04/28/12
Ah, yes. This sure does bring back memories. I was in the Color Guard and spent countless hours being yelled at by our drill sergeant while marching around. We did take 1st at Nationals. I performed with a horrible case of mono and then missed two months of school, but it felt so good to stand there and receive that first place trophy. Thanks for this well-written piece and the flood of memories.
04/28/12
Well written piece with purpose and magnitude. I'm sure it brought back a multitude of memories for many.

Nicely done. Thank you.

God Bless~
05/03/12
Congratulations for placing 9th in Masters and 13th overall!