The Official Writing Challenge
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04/27/12
What a compelling read! I couldn't stop. You imposed the sense of panic, fear and urgency so well on me that I could feel my own heartbeat quicken with your mc's run for freedom. Great, great job!
04/27/12
Good job with this riveting entry. I felt the panic and fear of the MC. Well done.

God Bless~
04/27/12
Powerful, well written story! I love the way you 'word paint' what's going on, putting the reader right there with the MC.

Well done, very well done!
04/30/12
Great story that held me from the beginning. So many wonderful images were created. This was a very well written entry and a very enjoyable read. Thanks!
05/02/12
This brings tears to my eyes. Oh how our history defines us, but God's grace lifts us up and beyond the ways of those who have gone before us. I can't imagine what it would have been like for all of the Devi's in the world. You did a splendid job building the characters. I could feel myself holding my breath as I read. This is such a strong piece.
05/02/12
Excellent story and very well written. It held my interest throughout. Good job. God bless!
05/03/12
Wonderful! My heart is clapping and cheering for you! Congratulations!
05/03/12
This was WONDERFUL! I loved it! Great job!!!!!
05/03/12
I love the way you weave your words through this. Very creative. Congratulations on a well deserved win!
05/03/12
Congratulations! Well done!
05/03/12
Congratulations! I was instantly swept up into your story. Beautifully written!
05/03/12
Congratulations for a well-written story with historical significance.
05/03/12
FaithWriters Congratulations and Hugs!

Wing His Words!
05/03/12
This is really a great piece. Congratulations on your EC!
05/03/12
Congratulations on your EC! I'm so happy for you!
05/04/12
A wonderful piece of writing, gripping and emotive. It left me wanting to know what happened next. Congtatulations on your win.