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04/27/12
Such a cute story, the interaction and dialogue was well done. Thank you for this, I enjoyed it...and the wrap up of where they all were at present day time was a perfect touch.

God Bless~
04/27/12
Loved this story! The childish dialogue was endearing; the boys really kept the story alive and 'rolling'. LOL

I especially loved the ending where you gave the 'outcome' of the characters. Well done, love this piece, it made me smile!
04/30/12
This was a great story with a tremendous "feel good" and "cozy" tone to it. I too liked the wrap up at the end where you let us see these delightful children as adults. Well done!
04/30/12
Clever, fun, and sweet! I enjoyed the endnotes, especially learning what happened to precious little Matt.
04/30/12
Good story and very well written. It holds attention completely. Good job.
05/02/12
Such a cute story. I love it and it was well written. Good job. God bless!
This is such a sweet story. I could easily see it as a picture book or maybe a early reader. I noticed at one spot you forgot an end quote but other than that it was perfect. The ending was absolutely the best and made me smile.