The Official Writing Challenge
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04/27/12
I enjoyed this creative take on the challenge topic. Really good writing as I felt I was actually with the MC running this race.

I do think the story could have been developed further and given its size (relatively short) ... you had room to expand some of the journey just a bit.

Nice piece of writing and a very enjoyable read. Thanks!
04/27/12
Good job...short and to the point with a good message too! Nicely done.

God Bless~
04/27/12
This was a good read. It held my attention with every word. It was very on topic also.
Good, tight writing!
05/01/12
This was well written and kept my attention throughout. Great job. God bless!
Having run the 400 in HS track I could feel the burn and the pain as I read. One of a runner's first rule is Don't Look Back. You did an excellent job of bringing that to the forefront.
05/03/12
Wonderful! Congratulations!
05/03/12
Congratulations! Well done!
Congratulations for placing 3rd in level 3 and 11th overall! (SO close but still a happy dance!)
05/04/12
Your descriptions were so vivid that I almost felt like I was the runner. What a perfect illustration of the verse. Fantastic writing!