The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this creative take on the challenge topic. Really good writing as I felt I was actually with the MC running this race.

I do think the story could have been developed further and given its size (relatively short) ... you had room to expand some of the journey just a bit.

Nice piece of writing and a very enjoyable read. Thanks!
Good job...short and to the point with a good message too! Nicely done.

God Bless~
This was a good read. It held my attention with every word. It was very on topic also.
Good, tight writing!
This was well written and kept my attention throughout. Great job. God bless!
Having run the 400 in HS track I could feel the burn and the pain as I read. One of a runner's first rule is Don't Look Back. You did an excellent job of bringing that to the forefront.
Wonderful! Congratulations!
Congratulations! Well done!
Congratulations for placing 3rd in level 3 and 11th overall! (SO close but still a happy dance!)
Your descriptions were so vivid that I almost felt like I was the runner. What a perfect illustration of the verse. Fantastic writing!