The Official Writing Challenge
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My favorite line is Your spirit calls come forth today. wow Reminds me of Lazurus being called from the grave. talk about your not looking back, oh my goodness.
You did a wonderful job with this poem. I love good poetry. thank you
Love this, so beautiful! '...What's past is past... redeemed at last...' Christ's Holy Blessings we receive! Thank you!
04/27/12
I too really enjoyed the line "what's past is past ... redeemed at last." Such a simply phrase with so much power and meaning.

This poem had such a gentle feel to it yet was loaded with depth and wisdom. Wonderful writing!
04/27/12
Simply a beautiful poem. Nothing more to say other than "thank you." Powerful message too. God Bless~
Simple, yet powerful. Good writing!
05/01/12
Beautiful! "What's past is past..redeemed at last." Loved it. God bless!
This is so lovely. The repetition just brings the message home. I could easily see myself memorizing this piece so I would always have it in my heart.
Congratulations for ranking 9th in level three!