The Official Writing Challenge
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How sweet and touching this is to read. When I got to the gift she gave her Grandma I cried. So loving and caring and sweet. Wow! So emotional. You did a wonderful job with this. thank you
I would like to see a few periods to break this up just a little. Otherwise, I think it is wonderful! Good writing and sweet memories. Thanks for sharing.
This was wonderful ... and such a creative take on the topic too. I really enjoyed the warm feeling it gave as you drew the reader in right from the beginning. The part about Cindy's gift, and overall demeanor, were a very well crafted contrast to her unfeeling daughter Debbie.

Very well done!
Clever entry and well written piece. It was an overall good story that made my heart smile. God Bless~~
This free verse rendition is positively lovely. You did a great job of pulling in the topic. I love the idea of no periods signifying no end and when Jesus lives in our heart we can rejoice because there are no periods. Amen!
Wonderful! Congratulations!
Congratulations on Highly Commended!
Ah, a beautiful, flowing memory. We can look back to see how far we've come, and they can be sweet memories, but I like to focus on the future. It's more exciting. Grandma has a wonderful "forward" to look for.

Contratulations on HC.
Congratulations on your HC and for placing 17th overall!