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10/31/05
Wise words! Thanks for writing!
10/31/05
I agree! Keep up the good work!
10/31/05
The diverse experiences of the senses were well descriptions. Good grounding for your lesson.
10/31/05
Lovely wisdom here. It would be good to add in asterisks between your pargraphs about Susan, Paul and Joseph.
11/01/05
Very well worded, and the message conveyed Timeless. Very well done.
11/01/05
Good message! I enjoyed reading this.
11/02/05
Nicely done (I'm a Susan).
11/02/05
I like how you set the stage and transitioned into Paul and the message. Nice work!
11/02/05
Nice story! I think it reflects the seasons of spiritual growth also--deeper, richer etc. Some like it some don't but the more entrenched we are in Christ the sweeter becomes the aroma to all. Enjoyed this work. God bless ya, littlelight
Deep truths here. Thank you for this inspiration today!
11/03/05
Nicely stated with valuable insight; so true. I enjoyed your article! :)
11/03/05
Very nicely done.
11/04/05
Loved the last paragraph! Real wisdom, and a great reminder.
:) Karen
11/04/05
I like the start and I love the message but somehow these two things seem disconnected. Like it started one way and then ended another way I didn't expect.
Very wise God given message, though.
11/04/05
Well written, think about a line or dash to break the first two paragraphs, I had to jump back to make sure I knew what was happening. Thanks for posting.
Enjoyed the verses you used and the way your story illustrated their meaning. Well done.
11/05/05
Mmm, particularly liked the grace expressed in the last paragraph. Yeggy