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04/19/12
Incredibly moving piece. Well done. May each of us look at one such as your MC with the compassion your church family showed here. May we also value our love to share with a hurting world in the same way your MC learned so graphically. Your beautiful descriptions took me with you. Thanks!
04/20/12
This was incredibly touching and brought forward so many emotions. It was a well written story and I felt as if it were unfolding before my very eyes.

We all have a story similar to the MC's -deep down inside. I connected with this on many levels, beautifully done. This will touch many hearts.

God Blesss~
04/22/12
This is one of my favorites I've read this week. It's so simple and heartfelt. You tell the story with very little embellishment, but cut straight to the core. You're MC is like every one of us, afraid to step outside what's comfortable for her, but, unlike many of us, she listens and forces herself to obey...and both she and the parents of her friend are blessed. A great lesson and a powerfully subtle job of telling it. Thanks for sharing it with us.
04/22/12
This is a very good story, Your characters are real and let the reader relate to every emotion. Good writing.
04/23/12
Such a moving story, very heartfelt. A great reminder to all of us. Good job. God bless!
04/25/12
This is a well told testimony and I relate to it so well. Dependence on Him in all things flows off the tongue but sometimes not onto the road of action.

You portray the struggle well.
04/26/12
You unfolded this moving story well, and with it an important message. I can relate to the MC's struggle as I'm sure many others can also. Well done!
04/26/12
A very moving piece. The sorrow and feelings within the MC are expressed very well in the story. Thank you for sharing this. It touches a chord in my heart to feel along with the MC in deep sadness. Thank God for His love in times such as this. God bless.
Your writing is beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
Hi -

I have one word for this: excellent.