The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/12
Love the clever title! And, I so enjoyed this witty tale. Nicely done.
Thanks. God Bless~
04/24/12
Ahhh...a very sweet mouse of a tale:) Good story telling.
04/25/12
What a fun and imagainative story. I loved this - it made me smile throughout. Great job!
I enjoyed this. You painted a grand picture for me from the blue toes to the plundering old folks. Some of the sentences may not have flowed as smoothly as you wanted them to. I noticed a few spots that could use a comma. However I'd take those tiny errors because this is a fun read and a powerful message. I'm also delighted that you didn't go the path many chose this week in Ecclesiastes but developed a story that was on topic in a fresh way.