The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/12
I enjoyed this strong and powerful poem. Nice job, beautiful message.

God Bless~
04/19/12
Really lovely. A great poem with a fantastic last line. Love the lessons given here and the truths we need to always remember. Thankyu.
I too love that last line! Great poem!
Very nice flow to become entwined in it's message. I really enjoyed experiencing your poem. Thank you for your good work.