The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/12
What a deliciously captivating and romantic poem! I love the imagery you induced. The ending is perfect! This is right on target for the topic.
04/19/12
Beautiful! I especially loved
"And our linked hearts stumble their way, together,
To a better day."

Well done!
04/19/12
Beautiful thoughts and pictures throughout this lovely piece. I enjoyed every word.
04/19/12
Beautifully done. The entire piece was filled with great images, mesmerizing words, and a loving message.

God Bless~