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04/19/12
Father, Son, and Holy Spirit ... three reasons to love a God Who's love for us is unbreakable. Great concept! Your title goes perfectly with the story.

Your dialogue was really good, but I would have liked to see a little more action - something for the characters to do or something happening around them while they were talking.

All in all, a nice witnessing story. Bert was definitely ready with an answer, which is something we should all strive for.

"Be pleasant and hold their interest when you speak the message. Choose your words carefully and be ready to give answers to anyone who asks questions." ~ Colossians 4:6
04/19/12
Amen. Great job with this, and what better telling of the threefold cord than the
Father, Son and Holy Spirit?

Thank you. God Bless~
What can be better than giving the gospel!No greater story ever told! Well done.