The Official Writing Challenge
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04/12/12
Loved your ending! Great thoughts.
04/12/12
Beautifully done, and powerful conclusion. Amen.

I loved it. God Bless~
Wow this is powerful. I have tears in my eyes. You really touched my heart and reminded me to grab hold of today and be glad in it.
04/12/12
You touched me with your pain, and encouraged me with your outlook.
to have separated your piece into more paragraphs would have made it a bit easier to read, but still is is good writing and I enjoyed it.
04/12/12
Sorry, meant to say, more space between paragraphs.
04/13/12
Appreciated the deep, provoking message in this. We tend to moan and complain about the trivial until something shakes us up. I felt the emotions in this story and loved the ending. God bless!
Opening got my attention and submission is on topic. Grammar is good but spacing between paragraphs is necessary. The conclusion is well done.

I loved this piece.
God Bless.