The Official Writing Challenge
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04/12/12
Loved your ending! Great thoughts.
04/12/12
Beautifully done, and powerful conclusion. Amen.

I loved it. God Bless~
04/12/12
Wow this is powerful. I have tears in my eyes. You really touched my heart and reminded me to grab hold of today and be glad in it.
04/12/12
You touched me with your pain, and encouraged me with your outlook.
to have separated your piece into more paragraphs would have made it a bit easier to read, but still is is good writing and I enjoyed it.
04/12/12
Sorry, meant to say, more space between paragraphs.
04/13/12
Appreciated the deep, provoking message in this. We tend to moan and complain about the trivial until something shakes us up. I felt the emotions in this story and loved the ending. God bless!
04/14/12
Opening got my attention and submission is on topic. Grammar is good but spacing between paragraphs is necessary. The conclusion is well done.

I loved this piece.
God Bless.