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04/12/12
This is beautiful, intense and poetic. It may not appeal to everyone but it struck a deep chord within my heart. I loved how you used the importance of the number seven to stress your point even more. I also enjoyed the literal translation of the word holiday. A holy day for my soul seems quite lovely and perfect.
04/12/12
A poetic masterpiece. Amazing job with this entry. It was powerful and compelling, and can be interpreted in many ways.

Thank you. God Bless~
04/12/12
Lovely imagery, fantastic expression/comparison between our days/lives and the push/pull cycle of ocean waves. Great choice of words, (loved 'salty and spitting'). I felt myself churning, and rolling, along with the piece.

My only question is this: you have the ocean symbolism in every paragraph except the first and last, did you have a reason for this?
04/12/12
Some lovely, flowing words, and I can certainly relate. I'm grateful for those days of rest. Good writing.
04/13/12
I think most of us can relate to the pounding of waves in our lives. We long for the calm as this so vividly points out. Thanks for sharing. God bless!
04/19/12
Congratulations for ranking 6th in level three and 20th overall!